Tuesday 25 November 2014

SHOT LIST FOR THE UNHINGING


Sound
Vision
Actors
Props
Notes
Flashback sound
India’s head slowly rises, eyes open. She looks left
Young Girl
Chair
Rope
Only see part of her head and her eyes looking around – with a few bruises on her head. She then has a flashback
Footsteps and background noise of road and public
India walking over to gym
Young Girl
/
Only see back of India, walking away from camera. Then cuts back to India in basement.

India eyes move to right
Young Girl
Chair
Rope
Close up of her eyes moving to right. She then has another flashback
Little screeching over cloth
Jacks arm/hand comes round her mouth and holds cloth (with chemical on it) and India passes out



Audio flashback of Mother shouting at Jack as a child
Jack is looking into the mirror.
Male
Mirror
Jack is very angry when looking in mirror and then smashes it.
Voiceover from Mother shouting in visual flashback
Jack takes a piece of the mirror and goes over towards India
Male
Young girl
Piece of mirror

India starts to beg for Jack not to hurt her.
Little whimper/ sobbing
Jack cutting India’s face
Male
Young girl
Broken mirror
Reaction shot in mirror – only see part of her face
Bang on the closing door
Jack walks out of the basement door
Male
/


India tries to reach for a piece of the broken glass
Young Girl
Piece of broken glass

Footsteps
Jack going up the stairs towards the attic
Male
/

Voiceover from news reporter
Lady on the news talking about missing girl
Woman
Microphone
Cuts between news reporter and India
Cutting of rope
India using piece of broken mirror
Young Girl
Piece of broken mirror

Voiceover from news reporter
Lady on news again
Woman
Microphone

Cutting further into rope
India using piece of broken mirror
Young Girl
Piece of broken mirror
We see India finally cut through the rope and gets rope off her wrists
Banging on a door
A closed basement door
/
/

Door flinging open
A basement door opening, as a girl runs out – you don’t see her face
Young girl
/
Young girl is bruised
Tense music
Over-shoulder shot of girl peering out the basement door – seeing if the coast is clear.
Young girl
/

Footsteps
She sneaks then runs (in hallway), we see her feet
Young girl
/
Tracking shot of her feet
Footsteps/scraping sound
She snatches a mobile phone off a table by the door as she runs out of the house
Young girl
Phone on charge on a table by the door.

Footsteps.
Over voice of news report talking about the girl.
She runs out of the house
Young girl
/
Tracking shot
Music / natural sounds
Over the shoulder shot of the kidnapper looking at the open door
Male
/

Footsteps
Running on gravel and woodlands
Young girl
/
Mid-shot pans to the right
Branches moving
She moves branches with her hands,
Young Girl
/
Leads to flashback.
Camera is her face
Tense suspense music
Shows her hands are tied up
Young Girl
Rope, chair
FLASHBACK
Footsteps
Running, low angle shot
Young girl
/


Midi-shot we see the girls neck, which is bruised and cut
Young Girl


Frantic breathing, tense suspense music. Scream.



We see a knife next to the girl’s neck as if she had just been cut.
Young Girl, male hands holding the knife
Knife
FLASHBACK
Footsteps (of Jack)
Running, see the girl in front far ahead
Young girl
/
Point of view shot
Frantic breathing
We see her lips parted
Young girl
/
Leading to flashback
Female screaming
The man puts a finger to her lips to shush her
Young girl, Male hands
/
FLASHBACK
 Footsteps coming to stop (India)
She stops running,
Young girl
/

Breathing,
The girl looks around, pulls out the phone
Young girl
Phone
360 shot
Phone dial
She calls 999
Young girl hands
Phone
Close up
Slow footsteps
The man walks towards the girl, we see her looking at a phone
Young Girl
Phone
Point of view shot
Girl talking on the phone “help me its me India Hagerman,” she then whimpers
We see her on the phone
Young Girl
Phone
Behind shot
Heartbeat
She turns around. We finally see her face
Young girl
/
Panning shot
Tense sound
A gun is rising up in the man’s hand
Males hand
Gun

Dead phone line
Title
/
/
/
Dead phone line
We see the phone on the floor abandoned



“That was India”
We see her shocked and worried face
Female operator
Headset.
Reaction shot

1 comment:

  1. OK but I suggest a conversation with your group about developing this a little further.

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